Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Review Essay Revision

I'll have to admit that when we did revisions for our essay, mine was not completely finished..

So yes, I did take to heart what was said, although I was working in a 2-man group, yet I knew my essay needed quite a bit of work because it was not totally finished! I feel like I hear different feedback every time I work in these groups, which is quite helpful! I never hear the same things, I always get different pointers, to help me work on my essay.

I was told clarity was the issue this time, which I definitely went and worked on and hopefully fixed!

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